It was alright... for a rotoscope.
I think you really let yourself down with this piece.
The script was terrible, the plot was non-existent, the characters looked like a 5 year old drew them, the animation was dogshit and the sound made my ears bleed, you should feel ashamed of yourselves.
this is my cartoon...
GET THE FUCK AAAAAAATTAAA HERE!!!!!!!
I feel exactly like this!
one day... :'(
One day! :D
This should have got daily first. Refreshing to see something made purely out of experimentation rather than the same regurgitated shit. Make more please, keep me sane.
Really funny, The script was really good, your a pretty funny guy, you know that? I think you can improve on a few things though.
1. Do some artwork for your title screen, Its really ...brown.. and boring.
2. Your characters are stuck in place! make them move their heads when they speak at least.
3 Work on your artwork! The backgrounds were a little basic. Maybe TOO basic, put some detail in there man!
Work on those things and it'll improve the overall look of your work a TON. It'll be cool seeing more stuff from you, keep it up.
(Also put flash ads on your toons, you may as well make a little cash if you can, so why not?)
Thanks for the feedback.
I've been told about making the characters move more etc a few times now, i'll definitely be sure to in my next animation... I've also never been great at backgrounds, and looking into getting somebody to help out with just basic things like that.
Also, I try make cash from youtube partnership - thanks for the advice anyway!
Daily 5th ey? ey? ey?
well done :D
Hello there, new rising star of newgrounds :P
not enough violence
Wasn't very "brutal" if you ask me, more like humane euthanasia than anything. You should take note of psychicpebbles cartoons for examples of brutality.
wow, that was really something!
Beautiful artwork, great character designs, brilliant story and lovely music! But one thing that irks me is the jerky movement, I felt that the fight between the shady guy and the original guardian could of been a bit more dragged out and more visually appealing. the run cycle was pretty bad too, it lacked basic movement.
Overall I think this flash was awesome quality, you should just try to add some more dynamic movement, sort out the jerkiness... Work on that and your cartoons will be ASTOUNDING in the future.
I didnt really like it.
I think that this flash had great artwork but lacked actual animation, it was very sparse and I hardly saw any movement. I think for your next episode you should experiment with a lot more movement than just plain standing watercooler gags.
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