SkoopleFloop's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tavern Talks #2]

"Two fangers." loved everything about this cartoon, it was funny, the story was short but made sense and the pacing was good. Giggled everytime he said the two fangers line, I dont know what it is about that phrase it just gets me!

Good job.

Ganryu42 responds:

Thank you so much! Two fangers has been making me laugh for years haha!

[WIP Deltarune animation]

We usually refrain from posting WIP animations into the portal. I guess it looks good so far.

ender4905 responds:

I'm sorry, I'm new to this and I do not know a lot of things. Next time I publish it full! and thanks!

[Clone - The Beginning]

interesting concept but a little too short. It might be worth combining a few "episodes" before uploading. I liked the look of it though.

MiltoniusArts responds:

Yeah, this was meant more as an introduction/announcement for the animation idea. As it continues, small animation chunks will be strung together to create what will eventually be a more and more complete animation. So not until there's at least 2 minutes of footage to present will we see the next installment of this title.

[Sneak]

Interesting style of animation. Why don't you come up with a short script and flesh something out in a similar style? I mean, you can obviously animate fluidly.

IncendiaryStarfish responds:

Thank you so much! This was just an experimental thing though, I primarily stick to digital but I'll keep that in mind!

[Super kicks]

Look up "animators survival guide" mate. Im sure you can find a e-reader version online.

kaushalshah responds:

Thanks for an honest feedback!

[Mega-Hurtz]

I think you really let yourself down with this piece.

The script was terrible, the plot was non-existent, the characters looked like a 5 year old drew them, the animation was dogshit and the sound made my ears bleed, you should feel ashamed of yourselves.

Furthermore..... wait...

wait...

this is my cartoon...

FFFFUUUUUUUUUUUU-

kobbler responds:

GET THE FUCK AAAAAAATTAAA HERE!!!!!!!

[Arnold's Automobile Rent]

Really funny, The script was really good, your a pretty funny guy, you know that? I think you can improve on a few things though.

1. Do some artwork for your title screen, Its really ...brown.. and boring.
2. Your characters are stuck in place! make them move their heads when they speak at least.
3 Work on your artwork! The backgrounds were a little basic. Maybe TOO basic, put some detail in there man!

Work on those things and it'll improve the overall look of your work a TON. It'll be cool seeing more stuff from you, keep it up.

(Also put flash ads on your toons, you may as well make a little cash if you can, so why not?)

JulianCheese responds:

Thanks for the feedback.
I've been told about making the characters move more etc a few times now, i'll definitely be sure to in my next animation... I've also never been great at backgrounds, and looking into getting somebody to help out with just basic things like that.

Also, I try make cash from youtube partnership - thanks for the advice anyway!

[Fish Pie]

it's not bad

I feel like your trying too hard to emulate weebl. And the song feels forced rather than original and funny. Animation wise there wasn't all that there, just a bombardment of the same movie clip over and over... composition was great though, If it had been animated more then maybe it wouldn't have been so bad.

Funky-Chickin responds:

I try to be No one. inspired by, yes.
And of course I use the same clip over and over. its all the rage isn't it? :P
thank you for your honesty

[Drink Driving Chaos]

very...uh

very David Firth esque style of animation you have there. Maybe you should try expanding on it? Originality goes along way after all.

It was alright, nothing brilliant, but I did enjoy the voice acting, it was nice and clear and thats good to see.

hairygiraffe responds:

Yeah I really did try to make the voice acting nice and clear but not to fast so thanks for commenting on that.